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时间:17-12-22 09:08  作者:心上人♡  类型:英语作文 包月发表人气:799

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies that I spend a great deal of time on my homework. I hardly h*e made great progress in my study. Although I feel stressed at times, I believe enough sleep can be helpful. As a result, I always plan my day carefully. My parents are very strict with me in my studies. They care too much about my marks after each exam. They don’t allow me to do anything else. I feel bad about that. I think it’s necessary to h*e some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance *ween my schoolwork and hobbies.

Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                                                                      dyy

 

 

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