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时间:11-09-24 11:13  作者:bjcsynan  类型:英语作文 60金豆人气:71672

               My   Favorite  Book

Everyone has his favorite book. My favorite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain who is from American

The stories tell us about a adventures with the Tom Sawyer and his friends. The story takes place in a ST Petersburg Missouri in America. There are six people in the story, they are Tom Sawyer, PollyHuck FinnJoe, Becky and Injun Joe. The Injun Joe is the bad man of the story, so I hate him very much. My favorite scene is the Funeral scene, because it makes me move and laugh when I read here.

I think it is a great book in the world and it is worthy of being loved by many people.

  

    

 

 

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